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My Knife by ~DarkPoetPop:iconDarkPoetPop:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Spoken Word


i sit here alone
holding this knife
no one to comfort
thinking of life

this knife is me
its both sharp and strong
it has purpose
it can be wrong

people misjudge
this knife is not bad
it is not evil
still you get mad

for people use this knife
to do the evil act
things unthinkable
things without fact

i will not use it
for this knife is good
this knife is me
we're never understood
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this is my poem about my knife, i do not use it, i like to have the knife with me. it brings peace and power within its blade to calm me down.

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Mood: Joy ~CassiNova500 Apr 16, 2007, 6:15:46 PM
I like this one, too. I must say though, the rhyming does seem a bit forced. I suggest that you use a rhyming dictionary (that's what I do). Don't worry, this is not cheating at all, I was even told by my English instructor to use one and that lots of famous poets use them as well. Other than that, the poems that I have read from you are very good, and I think that you should submit some more! :D

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~DarkPoetPop Apr 16, 2007, 7:15:29 PM
thanks, i have quite a lot, i have a bag full of scraps of others that i do but i only use the ones that i like on sites.
and i use rhyming dictionarys everynow and then, sometimes it does feel a bit like cheating so i try to use that as a last resort, thanks for encouragment lol :D

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~CassiNova500 Apr 16, 2007, 7:59:22 PM
Your welcome! I have lots more poems too, I just have to submit them.

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~caroofy May 5, 2007, 2:03:37 PM
poor knife :hug: i get that feeling sometimes. great poem, ^-^

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~DarkPoetPop May 6, 2007, 3:48:56 AM
thanks :)

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life is a bag of shit at times, just use it to grow flowers =D
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~some18kanal0n3 Oct 9, 2007, 4:33:18 PM
For once, a poem about a knife that doesn't sound emo.

Not the reason for the favourite:DThe favourite being for creating a poem thats sounds so true and conveying a meaning thats personal, so well to the reader.

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"When I dream I feel you're right there by my side, and when I wake there's nothing here but a cold mistake." -Me :halfliquid:

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~DarkPoetPop Oct 10, 2007, 8:35:17 AM
thanks =)

when my brother read that he just read the title and the first lines and said "emo"

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~some18kanal0n3 Oct 10, 2007, 4:17:54 PM
Haha, I know that feeling alll~ to well :)

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"When I dream I feel you're right there by my side, and when I wake there's nothing here but a cold mistake." -Me :halfliquid:

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